by ThrillMaker
Very hot! Especially the scene at the beach with Elena being held down by her husband while humiliates her by rubbing her toes all over her face, and makes her beg for it to stop. Love that Elena submits by voluntarily stretching and kissing her foot thanks.
I like the premise of the story, but the findom always comes out of nowhere, either leave it out or give it a little buildup
could not tell if Steven thought he was a good host or he has the hots for Peta or just plain stupid. we will see what happens next.
Findom pops up out of nowhere, with a story that has a buildup of two people staying at a friend's house out of charity, and being instantly rude to them.. not believable in the slightest. I know it's just erotica but try to make it relatable.
Ridiculous. Just throw them out. And where is the support from the husband? Too unrealistic.
wow what an incredible story, please continue the story is incredible. don't listen to the haters
Might be not that realistic, but hot as hell. I haven't regret a bit buying the full version
I loved this story. Please, continue to write the next step of Peta's conquering
This is the best story of all you wrote. I hope you write more chapters. Thanks
The way Peta is winning over Elena and taking power is super exciting.
Elena will end up surrendering to her rival