All Comments on 'The Houseguests (F/F)'

by ThrillMaker

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VanquishedVanquished3 months ago

Very hot! Especially the scene at the beach with Elena being held down by her husband while humiliates her by rubbing her toes all over her face, and makes her beg for it to stop. Love that Elena submits by voluntarily stretching and kissing her foot thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I like the premise of the story, but the findom always comes out of nowhere, either leave it out or give it a little buildup

PappasleazePappasleaze3 months ago

could not tell if Steven thought he was a good host or he has the hots for Peta or just plain stupid. we will see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Findom pops up out of nowhere, with a story that has a buildup of two people staying at a friend's house out of charity, and being instantly rude to them.. not believable in the slightest. I know it's just erotica but try to make it relatable.

Foxy_atSlutFamingFoxy_atSlutFaming3 months ago

Ridiculous. Just throw them out. And where is the support from the husband? Too unrealistic.

HallipoHallipo3 months ago

wow what an incredible story, please continue the story is incredible. don't listen to the haters

LoathemeLoatheme3 months ago

Might be not that realistic, but hot as hell. I haven't regret a bit buying the full version

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

moreee pleasssssse

RheanoRheano3 months ago

Great storytelling and build up!

Looking forward for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I loved this story. Please, continue to write the next step of Peta's conquering

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

INCREDIBLE please shsre next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Hot Story. Please keep on going...

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

It's a great story. It has a lot of potencial from this point. Keep on going

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Very exciting story. It promises so much…

Paypig666Paypig6663 months ago

Findom orgasm denial foot worship the joy of humiliation great story

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is the best story of all you wrote. I hope you write more chapters. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Hello. Are you going to write more chapters to this story? I wish you do...

baz84baz843 months ago

Part 2 any time soon ?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The way Peta is winning over Elena and taking power is super exciting.

Elena will end up surrendering to her rival

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I like the way you are building this and hope you continue with the story.

TheHurtLikerTheHurtLiker10 days ago

Love this! Can't wait for more

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Writing mostly on lesbian, findom, foot worship, trampling, gradual humiliation topics. But sometimes other categories too. Basically the kink is a heavy humiliation and exploitation of one female over another... I don't have any specific preferences in ages of dommes and sub...