All Comments on 'The Housesitter'

I’d love to read what happens next.

I’d love to hear what people would like to see happen next.

i really liked it and would love to read more from lisainprivate

Wait, I'd really like to read a part two with her and this guy who caught her show.

Wow, this is all kinds of amazing the way you right is so powerful in it's descriptions... the flow is amazing and doesn't distract at all from the story.

I'd love to see how Beth continues this journey, into her desires and how it effects her as a person too. Maybe even a scene where she remembers she's not the naive girl from before but a goddess who gets what SHE wants, as well as how she can also give a god what they want?

Great story. Keep writing!

Brilliant! I loved it and reading your bio actually does give away your gender if read carefully. Either way, definitely hot. Well done.