by CorsetLvr
You have not lost your touch, for making others want to touch themselves. :D
Keep up the good work.
That was one of the best pieces of erotica I have ever found on this site. Fantastic job.
Again, you have put in words the emotions and feelings that most of us dream of. Please keep up the good work.
U had me on the edge of my seat through out the whole story .... i loved it.... can't wait for the next chapter.
so I didn't score this chapter as high as some of the others. I look forward to a return to group activities minus the BDSM aspects. Great story overall.
Your writing is just perfect I has been with you througth the entire experience.
Keep on your writing excellence. I'm not english so excuse my writing.
Abrazos
Jaun
Oh, you didn't disappoint, this gets better with every chapter, you have a great talent for getting your readers off. The BDSM double-penitration scene was so hot, I came twice.
Excellent intro to this world, making it attractive to somebody like me who had kept a more firm boundary between pain and pleasure. Lots of places I could relate to some of the milder forms of painful pleasure
i too don't care this type sexual play. While this chapter was creatively written, i didn't enjoy reading all the detail and prep of Kim. I couldn't finish this one