All Comments on 'The Hunt for Snow White'

Intriguing story. I hope there will be more. Thank you for a very good story.

Thanks to those who liked the story. I know the writing is clunky, but it is the very first piece I have ever written.

Please say there will be more.

I imagine there's not much of a chance that this will be answered, but is the Captain in this story from a fairy tale? Ruadh is clearly meant to be Red Riding Hood, so I'm curious about the origins of the other figure who gets some action, here.