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WolfenherzWolfenherz9 months ago

Great story, thank you

scipioparkinsscipioparkins9 months ago

Brilliant little story, well told. Good premise too. Really enjoyed that.

gem4tnagem4tna9 months ago

Great story needs more chapters

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien4209 months ago

🌟🌟🌟🌟4 Stars Well written seemed rushed at the end. Need a part 2?

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBox9 months ago

they obviously don't plan doing further going further . . especially the way that it's closed it's done . .

even though plenty possibilities able happen ........................... btw . . i did going over 2 BERMUDA

souperkev011souperkev0119 months ago

Nice little story. I loved it!!!!!

muskyboymuskyboy9 months ago

Good story, very different. Too bad the Mom didn't get pregnant as well...

OriginsunknownOriginsunknown9 months agoAuthor

I am considering a way to do one more chapter, I mean, look at how the Jumanji movies ended and they always found a way ;) Thank you for the kind words and support.

Omart57Omart579 months ago

Very good, O! Thanks for sharing!

getthephenomgetthephenom9 months ago

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Thanks for writing this sequel. Would love to see how much chaos the idol can cause.

AndyAndrewsAndyAndrews9 months ago

Nice little story, very imaginative. Easy to read, fun. I hope you do write another chapter.

Baqfid12Baqfid129 months ago

Really liked it, wasn’t sure at first but came together nicely!

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...