All Comments on 'The Idol'

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getthephenomgetthephenom5 days ago

@OriginsUnkown, any plans to publish the 3rd part?

Baqfid12Baqfid129 months ago

Really liked it, wasn’t sure at first but came together nicely!

AndyAndrewsAndyAndrews10 months ago

Nice little story, very imaginative. Easy to read, fun. I hope you do write another chapter.

getthephenomgetthephenom10 months ago

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Thanks for writing this sequel. Would love to see how much chaos the idol can cause.

Omart57Omart5710 months ago

Very good, O! Thanks for sharing!

OriginsunknownOriginsunknown10 months agoAuthor

I am considering a way to do one more chapter, I mean, look at how the Jumanji movies ended and they always found a way ;) Thank you for the kind words and support.

muskyboymuskyboy10 months ago

Good story, very different. Too bad the Mom didn't get pregnant as well...

souperkev011souperkev01110 months ago

Nice little story. I loved it!!!!!

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBox10 months ago

they obviously don't plan doing further going further . . especially the way that it's closed it's done . .

even though plenty possibilities able happen ........................... btw . . i did going over 2 BERMUDA

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien42010 months ago

🌟🌟🌟🌟4 Stars Well written seemed rushed at the end. Need a part 2?

gem4tnagem4tna10 months ago

Great story needs more chapters

scipioparkinsscipioparkins10 months ago

Brilliant little story, well told. Good premise too. Really enjoyed that.

WolfenherzWolfenherz10 months ago

Great story, thank you

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...