All Comments on 'The Inbetween'

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nargatoulanargatoulaover 4 years ago

It's hard to understand what kind of creature the in between is. The story is dynamic but it felt a bit pointless. Like hearing someone talking on the phone in a bus but not from the start of the conversation. it's a confusing read.

bigdog1026bigdog1026over 4 years agoAuthor

thank you for your comment!

I agree, but keeping the relationship open was intentional. I am not a fan of answering all the questions. I is more fun to open the door and let the reader decide what is on the other side. How does the sexual relationship really work for the three of them? no idea or many ideas.

I do really love dogs.

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Enjoying the imagination of the various authors. This allows all to experience some amazing ideas, concepts and weird stuff.