All Comments on 'The Indian Party Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Fun continued indeed

So the wife has eventually turned from a fun loving wife to a slut who loves gangbangs and husband a willing cuckold.

What more you have in store for her and what about Mini the bride.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Fucking stupid

1 star, for more shit by gay assholes!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
gave it a 5 becasue assholes like annony

didn't like it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
gave it a 1 because assholes like bonnytaylor2

doesn't know what she's talking about. isn't this fun dear?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Why is all this garbage coming out of India?

Is the language barrier THAT great? Because this is just awful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
5*

Loved the story and more over loved that the racial assholes are pissed off.

impo_60impo_60about 9 years ago
Sick charaters...

This story is about sick people...All the charaters are sick...But the part for us to laugh till tearswas the husband feel: "he felt as if he was stabbed in the heart"!!!! He was the one that wanted that!!! And in the end accepted it all...I'm still laughing...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
gave it another 1

who is pissed off? just awarding trash what it deserves bonnie.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
it is really fun another 5*

Its really fun 5* for the pissed off assholes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
# 1

Enough said. Shit

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I realize that English isn't your first language, but you really should find a editor

whose first language IS English if you are going to publish in English. Otherwise, the use of totally wrong words, bad grammar and incomplete sentences make a bad joke out of what I assume you intended to be a erotic story. I will give you a 3* rating for imagination. It could have been a 4* or even 5* piece without those problems.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Common man

This is a story man and got my dick hard.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
5*

This is a love story wrapped in softcore pornography (the last scene says it all!)

I hope there will be Ch. 3 & 4.

The story can be used for jack-off purposes, too!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
WOW

Some of very good Indian wife stories posted by the author.

Returning to Lit after almost two years and your stories made my day.

Hope you write more.

The Indian Wife and Boss is the best.

B J

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Awesome story got me hard

I wish i share my wife like this with a group of men!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Indian Fuck words will make it more enjoyable

Exciting story but you should not write in English style. It will be more exciting if you use Indian words like chodo mujhe instead of fuck me and lund chutt etc. Also get your gender correct there is mix up of his for a girl etc.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
good job

Real good job. Kept me hooked for a good half hour

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more parts

please dont close this chapter. we want more parts

shang40shang40over 7 years ago
Rahul is lucky

To watch Rekha getting double प्रहार

अगली बार तो वो चुत और गांड मरवा के लेगी वो भी राहुल के सामने

मेरी बीबी भी चुद्दकड है

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
You're a fucking pussy grow a pair and kill them all

You're a fucking pussy grow a pair and kill them all

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
☆☆☆☆☆- (4.65/5.0 = 93% = A)

Rahul innermost emotions & desires are very well depicted, yet it was intentionally left understated.

When you are a voyeur/cuckold husband your actions (or lack thereof) look strange to people who have not walked a mile in your shoes.

The following is what happened to me when my wife & i moved to Canada.

You know only two well that you share her body with another man (other men) but in spite of that, or perhaps thanks to that, you can't have enough of her body.

You know she is fucking somebody (you don't know whom) yet you readily accept her made up excuses why she is going out on Friday or Saturday evening WITHOUT YOU. She tells you she will be late. You tell her "You have the key".

She comes back at 2 am. You ask her if she had a good time with girlfriends. You do not ask her why she smells fresh like straight from the shower.

It all is kinky (perverted if you wish) but it also is more human than society at large is ready to accept or admit.

It is hard to be different.

vkaprasad1981vkaprasad1981almost 4 years ago
Amaazing story

Hi tantrik

Dont stop here. Continue this story. Plzzzzzzzz.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful

Hey dear, I just loved your story and I hope that you will be continue this saga with more uniques and better erotic ideas and presentation, waiting for the next part

- kashish

dick_hardydick_hardyover 2 years ago

Any story where the husband gets his wife fucked, but he himself doesn't get any is worth 0. Only losers do that

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

It's my favorite.. I wants like Rahul as my husband... Because he knows what she want... So he ll given every moments of her life❤

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