All Comments on 'The Infinite Bk. 03 Ch. 06'

Wow. Best chapter of the entire story.

A surprising and enthralling chapter, so much territory covered so deftly. Well written. Look forward to more of your writing.

I have been reading your story solidly for 3 days. It's so good!!!

wow! another superb chapter.

outstanding worth the wait hope 7 comes sooner

Awesome!

Wow

This chapter is like a whole book... the triumph over evil, tender love, the wise soul, heartbreak, acceptance... just WOW!

I agree with Hiding in Portland, the bestest and badest chapter of the entire story. The two asshole princes are so going to get what they deserve (karma).

MY GOD WHAT A CHAPTER.

Great. Well written. Enjoyed. Love the way the story is progressing. On some occasions when reading the literotica stories, sex scenes could be written as we fucked, then fucked more, this was so much better. I thought the slow build up and massage before escalation to making love was great, and realistic for a considerate lover. Love the character development. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you.

I realised that as I read the story i never had to think about the words, punctuation, grammar, tense. The writing was smooth flowing and descriptive, reading through I was immersed in the story, the written words just delivering your ideas. Professional. I can only give you five stars once. :-)

Really pulled it together! Undying ties starting to form. Maybe he can let the elf in on some next.

Very good chapter! I think I speak for everyone. We all wanted to beat Those Princes. Can't wait for more chapters! 5*

That ending had me in tears. wow!

OUT-FUCKING-STANDING !!

Great work! Looking forward to the next chapter

funtastic in its finetuned sculpting and caring for us beings open the opportunity to reflect and grow it left me sated and satisfied in a way like filled with mannalief to the brim while reading some episode feels from live flashed it reassures the art and the choose of the path hearing this inner music and knowing everything is possible magic is real thilo germany thank you for sharing

Wonderfully written, beautiful sentiments and very moving. Thank you.

Super good chapter!!!

You know, the very beginning of this story seemed a little off to me. Why would a person that has lived over a hundred lifetimes get hung up over a girl, just because she had really red hair? 24 chapters later, we get the full answer. Whether it was detailed planning or happenstance, the result is masterfully executed. It really brings home why Noah acts the way he does. I compare this to the Iron Druid series that I dropped after book 3. The protagonist in that book is supposed to be a 1000+ year old druid, yet he thinks and acts like a 25 year old from the modern day. Noah, on the other hand, is much more consistent and believable character. Great work.

Awesome is the only word that comes to mind. Love it!!!

More than 100 lifetimes, if we use an average of 30 years old, is 3000 years. We know he lived longer, and that he lived shorter lives. Valia may be of his age, but all these others have the experience of a gnat, comparatively. And this new magic world he is in, if it were me, I'd be doing what he is, too. He has never been with magic before, so just in case he never comes back, he needs to learn as much about it as he can. Kudos, Sage, you are hitting it out of the park.

Now if you would only release your chapters faster. Daily would be just fine. (ROFL)

You write with great insight, while narrating a difficult and fascinating story. Keep it up!

Felt so many emotions with this one. Absolutely fantastic job, deserving of a very sincere thank you.

Dude this story has me giddy every time I see the word infinite on lit, this definitely one of my favorite books iv ever read and iv read thousands

You are an artist, I almost teared up

great drama loved the twist with the confession at the end

Beautiful.

Wow, the end almost left me in tears and choked up. An incredible world and story you have written and would be A+ even if it were rated PG.

Powerful emotional reveal!

I swear im not crying....

We all shed some tears there . Well done .

A truly mature understanding of human needs and wants. Thank you.

Spectacular, but I do have a serious complaint. Why is it that his friend in Alexis is always asking to be trusted but never trusts? The level of hypocrisy is absolutely bewildering, given that she has bought into the honor code espoused.

Wow. Just masterful. Noah walks the forlorn path too, doesn't he Sage?

Holy fuck. Confessions like that ending lead to true friendship. Alexis will know that only she knows any truth about him, knowing that absolute truth will forge a trust between them that’s so tight that the relationship could become so close that others will mistake it as a threesome. Maybe the wonderful Bunny Lady can be his eternal lover and he can give the redhead a child for her and Alexis.

Who knows, but I want the friendship between Noah , Alexis and Sophia to be close and forged by trials and triumphs until it’s unbreakable

OH my, That was Intense.

Sorry, can only give 5 stars...

This was an amazing chapter. So well done!!!