by Sage_of_the_Forlorn_Path
Once again you have fabricated a world with such detail that I can almost smell the marketplace. Thank you
Loved it but Alexis seeing the light so quickly might have been a bit rushed
Didn’t these people see what happens to someone that makes an enemy of Noah? They will find out.
You are spinning a great story. This is the kind of story I like the most on Lit. It starts graphic and then settles into something much more. I’m enjoying the social commentary.
That should have ended with more ugh …I love the message but damnit Sophia stepping up to the plate .. so fucking hawt!
I’m glad that the girls are on the same page. Forge a common goal into shared successes.
I like how you allowed Alexis' fears and struggles to come to a head in this chapter and resolve.