by TDRay1612
A very nice story that for me has a very pleasant reading result.
While there has been romanticism, I think it would have been better placed in Sci-Fi & Fantasy, since I think the background is a magical situation, since it involves changes of temporal planes in the development of the story, which, be a magical fantasy.
This does not detract any merit from the story, and I think the end is open enough for a sequel, although not essential.
Good job.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
Tis the story of Brigadoon all over again and well done indeed. It's a fantasy that's worth revisiting every so often.
Nice story. Kinda reminds me of an old Twilight Zone episode way back in the 1960’s.