All Comments on 'The Installation'

by Compulsive_Fornicator

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Usual Literotica trash.

Garbage

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
The descent continues

Each story worse than the last - I didn't think it possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
worthless

total shit

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Sorry slut an BI-WACC is no go

She is nothing but a gutter slut. He is a Bi-WACC so move story to gay section.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ughh!!

I couldn't even read it all. Never tell a story with "you"...tell it from first person or third person perspective. From the other reviews it sounds like I didn't miss much.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Narrator is guessing

Hubby is narrating, but he cannot see the action from the attic, he can just HEAR what is happening! Nonetheless, he describes things he would have to have been in the room to SEE. The other option would been to either videotape it, or have Sweetie give a VERY detailed debriefing, including detail she would probably NOT remember (or at least mention)!

2*

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
you say your

a writer well that a lie, from what i read i would say you might have about a grade 7 education also the I.Q. of a turnip.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Can use an editor

But I liked the story, was hot and if your into wife sharing then it is a good read.

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