by Compulsive_Fornicator
Each story worse than the last - I didn't think it possible.
She is nothing but a gutter slut. He is a Bi-WACC so move story to gay section.
I couldn't even read it all. Never tell a story with "you"...tell it from first person or third person perspective. From the other reviews it sounds like I didn't miss much.
Hubby is narrating, but he cannot see the action from the attic, he can just HEAR what is happening! Nonetheless, he describes things he would have to have been in the room to SEE. The other option would been to either videotape it, or have Sweetie give a VERY detailed debriefing, including detail she would probably NOT remember (or at least mention)!
2*
a writer well that a lie, from what i read i would say you might have about a grade 7 education also the I.Q. of a turnip.
But I liked the story, was hot and if your into wife sharing then it is a good read.