by elsol
Like this storyverse - seems internally consistant. Characters are focussed and well defined; the reader needs to work to keep everyone straight though. Possibly a cast of characters would be useful after the last of the series (as for AMR), as well as a glossary of the powers. The writing is purposeful and clear; the sex only incidental, and this is appropriate. Good story.
Elsol;
Your writing never ceases to amaze me, this was a great addition to the institute series, I cannot wait for its finally. . .
Maraxis
I find the series very deep, and needing multiple reading.
I will return again and again.
Thank You
John