All Comments on 'The Internship Ch. 01'

The story is just so totally implausible. I like a good "nonconsent" story, and the set-up wasn't bad. But the story kept becoming more and more beyond the realm of the possible. Maybe, try again with a single firm (and leave out the threats of never working in the accounting field, anywhere).

what a let down i kept reading thinking that it would get better eventually but it never did........... it has potential to be a really hot story but you just drug it out too far and didnt give any action honestly the most diapointing story i have ever read

IT has potential but too many details

I'm guessing you're male—you've apparently got no idea how bra sizing works. For future reference: the number part of the size measures not the breast, but the torso. So to say that a 32C is "slightly smaller" than a 38C is totally ridiculous—a C-cup would look much larger on a 32-inch ribcage than on a 38-inch one. Also—"height and weight" do not describe a woman...especially not just lists and lists of them. Words, please!

This one has got my female psyche worked up. I hope you go further with this than the others. Hey I like rough profane sexual storytelling..

The way you describe your characters (5'8'' about 150 lbs long black hair floral blouse flared butt blah blah blah) is really irritating and very distacting. This seems like it was written by a sixteen year old. Terrible.