by submitit
To say this was your first published story, I found it very readable and most enjoyable.
You obviously have a talent for this kind of fiction and I hope we will all see much more of your excellent work in the future.
Welcome, congratulations on a great début and thank you for sharing your talent with us.
That was very hot. I come here to read erotic stories that get me wet so the few mixed tenses weren't terribly distracting; my pussy didn't notice. I gave it a 5.
Hope you'll continue this.
Nice!!! Any chance of being there on Monday and see all the toys she'll get?????!!!! Thanks
one of the better stories i've read here in a while. (good ones are so few and far between) a few little things that didn't quite add up but nothing major. Hope you continue.