All Comments on 'The Intruder'

With just a few sentences you took what would have been an average story and turned it into something special. That fantastic and funny ending absolutely made this story. Well done!!!

I've always wanted to get anonymously taken by force. Loved the sex stuff which made me hard and the twist on the end.

Good story, the first ones good…I’m going to read the rest of your stories.

Great turn of events, it truly made the story for me.

Wow.. not the ending that I expected. Thanks to the author for an unexpected ending !!