The Invisible Hand Pt. 04

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"Wow, you are doing that?"

"Yes," she answers resolutely, "I want to be a better person for my witch, proud of who I am and brave."

That earns a hug and kiss on the forehead:

"I'm very proud of you."

"Yeah, don't get ahead of yourself: I'm not telling them about the slave thing!" she adds, a bit apologetically.

I laugh and reassure her:

"Yeah, learn from me!"

"But isn't it wrong?"

"I think that it's really hard to find a person who understands the totality of you, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Honestly, I don't blame my folks for not understanding my relationship. I do blame them for intruding in my life, for their lack of trust and the way they treat me, but not this. Some people just don't understand, even if they try their hardest, and you can't hold them responsible for mistakes they make when they don't know what they are doing, can you?"

"I guess… At least I'm already out as a pansexual, and they haven't taken that too badly…" she muses.

We stay silent for a little while, thinking perhaps both about the sharp turns that our lives took in just a few months.

"Better get into my dress, I want to look like who I am: his dark lady!" I say, caught by a sudden urge to get married.

"That's the spirit, boss!" Sadie approves.

No, it's not exactly about getting married… I think it's… It's hunger, I'm feeling hunger, real hunger, for the first time in almost a decade. Only now I truly realize how it was never about food, it was about life. I want to eat life now, I want to feast on my future!

"I'm coming for you, my love, and soon you'll be mine forever!"

My demon whispered his sweet threat, his ominous declaration of love, with perfect timing. After all, he knows what's in my heart. He always knows.

THE END

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Thanks for staying with me and my characters till the end of this story. It was supposed to be an experiment, something weird and new. As such, I guess it was not for everyone's palate and that's perhaps why so few read it. I'm still glad I wrote it and I would love to receive any (constructive) criticism, especially if you have a negative opinion about it.

Thanks!

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cmj711cmj711over 1 year ago

Thank you very much for taking me on your journey!

Such creativity!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i LOVE this story! I usually get bored with multiple part stories, but the development and everything that could have happened enthralled me. You're simply brilliant, and I will definitely be coming back.

bushyTrailbushyTrailalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

basicbrat181basicbrat181almost 3 years ago

God I love this story it’s one of my top 2

basicbrat181basicbrat181over 3 years ago
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That story does sound interesting actually and I’ll check out what you recommend I was thinking maybe the demons backstory like maybe previous subs he had or his discovery of what he wanted but if you can’t see a story about that it’s all good

bushyTrailbushyTrailover 3 years agoAuthor

Answer to "More please somehow".

Thanks for your comment, it means a lot. Unfortunately, I wouldn't know how to continue this story, as I feel I have said what I wanted to say. Nadia is hungry now, after all, and that was the destination meant for her journey.

I do have another story in mind about this topic, which was actually the one that has inspired "the Invisible Hand", but I deemed it waaaay too weird for this site. Religion (and my aversion to it) is a major theme and the demon there is a woman who got herself horn implants (not the ones you can actually get nowadays, a more sci-fi-ish version that looks like proper horns). I doubt it's what you're after.

Check out shyexhibitionist's and absolutist's work (for the latter, make sure you also go on their deviantArt profile), they've got stories that may titillate your palate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please somehow

I keep coming back and reading this story and I love the control aspect so much and would love to read more about these characters maybe a spin off with more information about the beginning of their relationship and introducing the chastity belt

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Thanks for not leaving us hang

and releasing the final part of your last story. I am also busy and glad to find part 4 this weekend, when returning from work. I found it a round story and like the remote control idea as a great new technical way of ganing control. Can't await what kinky ideas You present next - great job - please continue - JtL

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Refreshingly new story

Hi, have just now found your story and read all four parts.

Nice new ways of excerting surveillance and control.

A sinister and scary Master though having a big heart.

Good story!

Grey Master.

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