All Comments on 'The Invisible Man'

Loved It! Fun story, O!

Fun and sexy…imaginative and kinky!

Just a comment about an other story 'blind date'. If you write lots of stories, you of course can do 2 things, constantly repeat the same story pattern over and over, or do all kind of variations.

I think it's fine, you did a good job there, even though I don't care about mom and dad sex. I'm more into brother+sister sex stories.

Still I would have given it 5 stars, if possible...