by LaurenWestley
not big on scat, but otherwise just absolutely wonderful. Very hot, very well written ... i'm soooooo wet. Keep it up!
I love that she is turning into a girl but the shitting and pissing ruins the story you should stay with a story line without the grossness it would be a great story.
I find myself agreeing with the turn-off pertaining to the shit. On the other hand, I loved the piss-play. I'm a urinal, myself.
It is so well written that I am revolted.
So, if I was Lauren:
I would have made the best first and last meal of their lives "cream of curar" and during their two hours of agony I would have cut into small pieces. After I'd eaten with great pleasure "BBQ of gay thugs" ;-)
Cariños ♥