All Comments on 'The Island Ch. 01'

by LaurenWestley

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RoniBRoniBover 15 years ago
yummy: slap me silly with this one.

not big on scat, but otherwise just absolutely wonderful. Very hot, very well written ... i'm soooooo wet. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
mixed about story

I love that she is turning into a girl but the shitting and pissing ruins the story you should stay with a story line without the grossness it would be a great story.

freakytabbyfreakytabbyover 12 years ago
Not so mixed

I find myself agreeing with the turn-off pertaining to the shit. On the other hand, I loved the piss-play. I'm a urinal, myself.

ComodineComodineover 11 years ago
Viva la revolution ☺

It is so well written that I am revolted.

So, if I was Lauren:

I would have made ​​the best first and last meal of their lives "cream of curar" and during their two hours of agony I would have cut into small pieces. After I'd eaten with great pleasure "BBQ of gay thugs" ;-)

Cariños ♥

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Why?

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