All Comments on 'The Island of Three Ch. 10'

by CloverGazer

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JxxxTolkienJxxxTolkienabout 1 year ago

Some things are definitely worth the wait, and your stories are one them. Thanks for another amazing chapter!

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumabout 1 year ago

You have kind of predestined the outcome of story. The gunshot to be that loud in the cabin, the firer had to be on the island already. How the person got there is the mystery. My idea was that Tobias see a drifting sailboat without a main mast. Tobias swims out to boat and finds a middle aged man in a dingy which he was trying to tow the boat. The man is dead. Tobias climbs in boat and finds 3 girls suffering from dehydration. Tobias gets dead man on boat and rows boat to island. Where he drops anchor and goes ashore to get water and his sisters. You can take it from there๐Ÿ˜€

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumabout 1 year ago

Forgot to say welcome back

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Nobody is forcing you to read any story, let the guy write what he wants. Lots of stories on this site that I don't enjoy and if I don't like it, I just move on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Tobias knows the words to "Macarena"? Color me impressed! ๐Ÿ˜‹

In other news, five stars. What else? ๐Ÿคทโ€โ™‚๏ธ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Five stars! Great story series. Sad to see Author's profile update saying that he/she will be working on other stories. Would like this continued. Ridiculous to read a commenter's complaint about lesbianism. It's an erotic fantasy - you have 2 hot girls and you expect nothing to happen between them?

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

More please!

MrTylerWpgMrTylerWpg12 months ago

Oh god I just found this amazing story please don't let it end like this!

Sumnut96Sumnut9610 months ago

Well told, as usual. Going to finish any time soon? PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

It was d conversation between d siblings which gave me high ! Excellent long sibling story !!

Frankie1952Frankie19523 months ago

One of the best stories on here. I just hope the invaders are not pirates or slavers. More please.

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*Sorry, no update yet* Im currently on hiatus. Manor of workload in my real life is the cause. However, I always have my stories on the brain and keep notes on ideas and where I want them to go. I'll try and get some done before too long... Upcoming submissions: (In no parti...

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