All Comments on 'The Island of Wonder Pt. 12'

This is bit of a sharp finish. Not hot the normal standard

Excellent series. You could of extended it another page as it came across as rushed, but it did the job.

5 stars

5 stars +++ as usual. Great series. Hope new and outrageous stories (multi-chapters) are to follow.

Just keep up the great work, please.

Have to say I am truly sorry to see this series end. Have truly enjoyed it.

Not a fan of the ending but a fan of the series. 5* for old times sake...

Not the typical chapter, and definitely seemed rushed. Looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Proof that it is possible to get tired of sexual writing. When the best things in life are free, they aren't as satisfying.

Five ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ For this series overall. Please keep the stories coming, your writing is enjoyable.

I loved the series. Well written and very erotic. This chapter was a disappointment though. You stopped the action right when it was about to get interesting.

If possible, and the muse cooperates, please start a sequel series to this wonderful story so that we get more time with this cast of characters.

Cheers

Yes...I mirror the comment..."5 stars...for old times sake"...

Even tho'...the ending was Really Cheesy!! I know who the two girls are, I think we (all) do...????!!!! But, you could have ended it better...

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Top Shelf Series!

I enjoyed it for following a person from a very Judeo-Christian society into one with vastly different societal norms and showing how he adapts to it.

[Plus the sex was pretty HAWT too!]

11/10!!!!!

Wedding day? Deflowering day? Ending felt rushed and confusing.

Well it was long but entertaining right through, loved it , and all i can say is damn it I'm in the wrong family.

For a South Pacific Island, with fairly restricted immigration, there were a lot of people with a Western names...