All Comments on 'The Island: Pt. 17 - Kdy'

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 2 years ago

Excellent as usual but far far too short.

GortmundyGortmundyalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Half of this story doesn't seem to have been printed. I'll resubmit.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 2 years ago

That’s better !! Lol

Looking to see Bethari blossom

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Outstanding! Lucky lucky Kady, now that’s the epitome of a good “rape fantasy”. I was very relieved that that Florence and Marta weren’t interrupted by Marcus and his Neanderthals.

Tess (uk)

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The Tattooed Woman - 16 March: Chapter 1 of Tattooed Woman edited (again), rewritten and now on site. Changes in this version are based on constructive criticism I received. So, lets see what you think. Part 42 being written, in the offing and coming soon. Dramatis Perso...