All Comments on 'The Jack-Off'

If you want to write garbage, that’s your right, but choose different characters. Writing military members like this is disgusting. Wouldn’t happen. Melvin would have been disappeared.

I served 3rd Bat, 2ng red, 2nd Mar Div... 3 years. You?

Maybe the good twin should try writing for a while.

racist gay cuck shit.

I hope you forgot there is a Part II. That would be the best decision!

Loved it, Please write more of this story!

1 Star

Putrid ir/cuck military porn.

26thNCuck Disapproved

sorry johnny you are a queer wimp.

Not only it's a cuck story but also a gay story. No real Love in it.

It sucked as bad as Johnny.

Nothing like being a Johnnie. Soooo hot.

Great story! Thanks

Excellent story.

So hot. Can’t wait for part 2. Would love to watch my wife like that.

Someone should shoot all 3 of them. Too bad there are no ratings less than 1.

Look, I am not into men sucking cocks or humiliation or domination. But this is erotic fiction and the author can take it where he wants too. He can place his characters in any context he wants too. You read it- you either like it or you don't but this is not a bad story. And makes a person think and question his/her own sexuality. So yes all those comments that attack the author- do us all a favor and keep your opinions to yourself.