All Comments on 'The Janitor's Closet'

Fuck you and you “i love you but….” Fucking bullshit you stupid cocksucker.

I don’t care that you suck cock but it annoys me that you’re a moron. Saying “I love you but…” is like saying “I’m not a racist but…”

It means she doesn’t love her husband, and likely never has…it’s just the first rime she admitted it.

Love it!!! Need a chapter 2!!!!!

Not a loving wife story but a homosexual one. And the husband allowed himself to be debased so readily. What a waste.

Don't waste our time with this type of garbage. Find someplace else for this type of crap.

Disgusting!!!!

I got as far as "I like young pretty boys too" then baled out. FGS post this crap in 'Gay Male' where it belongs.

That was a wasted first effort. One star.

you wrote one story.. That's enough. Please find another hobby. Thank you.

No..really.. are there men out there that WANT this?

Or is this written by some power starved woman as a fantasy?

Whatever field the MC's PhD was in, it cerainly was not in English.

Just pathetic rubbish, please no more.

Not sure how this gay story ended up in loving wives. Pathetic husband who will be out on his ass sooner instead of later as wife becomes full-fledged cheap slut for black cock. Idiotic story.

Learn to punctuate dialogue. When the speaker doesn't change, don't close the quotes when you add a new paragraph. Instead, open the new paragraph with the ". Not seeing the closed quote at the end of the previous paragraph, we know the same person is speaking in the next paragraph. In the beginning of this story, with no attribution, and with every paragraph closed with quotes, the dialogue was hard to follow. Sadly, the plot began with a different feel, but it soon veered into the standard cliché set endemic to this genre. That's why these stories belong in Fetish-- they're all the same on an elemental level. 2/5.

Needed some tags... sorry.

Not no but Hell no. Why stay married to do this crap? Please stop writing why you are behind. LW should have a subcategory for cuck shit like this.

A divorce would solve the problem. Not even a great editor would solve the story.

Well, that was just pure shit. Well done for writing the worst first story of any author on LW ever.

please do not write again

Good first try- now for chapter 2

Probably a real hard bitting action on the janitor's cock done by the husband, could have end all of the ...... stuff...

Nothing like some over the top racism and hatred embedded in a story to let you know the author is a fucking piece of shit and should never be allowed to breed anyone.

Put Carl’s body in the janitor’s closet. Jamal won’t mind.

Really hot, where is part 2?