by Jessmartin
I'm generally NOT a big fan of Non consent stories... But you did this one pretty well !! Nice descriptions, a sexy main character, and raunchy sex is a good combo!! 5- stars for this one Jessmartin.
4 Stars, the concept is good, but the story comes off as really quirky to me. I, as the reader find myself having to fill in a lot of blanks and assumptions in the story. Also, I found two typos, "I bend over and take my cock in my mouth," and the second one was the word "clock" used instead of cock. You need an editor or at least someone to re-read what you write before you publish it.