All Comments on 'The Jock and the Sissy'

Loving it.. enjoy where u are going with it.. hope they will grow closer...an eventually move to sex... doesnt have to be.. just straight to raw...fucking... its great to see characters develop an grow with each other....then build something..."special"... Looking Very forward too the Next Chapter. .plz dont make us wait...2 long...

Write a part 2 please please please!!!!

..you write amazing gay erotica. More please!

You write really well, but it would've been better without the ridiculous size/cum situation. Yes, I know it was warned about before the story, that's just my opinion though,

I wish Sam's cock was just little larger. However this was very hot. Hope a have chapter two where Sam takes Brad up the ass.

I love everything in this story, and I really hope you are inspired enough to write a second chapter! Hopefully it will include their date and Sam taking Brad's big baseball bat in his cute, girly little butt.

Next time Brad should caress Sam's ass cheeks & thighs...

:-)

Sam NEEDS Brad's dick up his ass! Oh and Brad playing with Sam's little cock would be fun to read too!

This story was amazing!!! Loved the dirty talk!!

that was an fatnastic story. would like to read a secod part. its really amazingly written. thanks for that damn hot story

Your detailed description of Brad's hot muscles had me drooling! I really, really, REALLY hope you write a second chapter. Please? Pretty please?

no homo

write the next chapter soon

Fuck I love sissies! There is nothing hotter to me than watching a pretty little sissy frantically jerking his dick with a mouth full of cock.

I loved this story, it was hot and well written. I love a man that produces massive loads of cum when he cums in my mouth. That is what a cocksucker like me works for is that cum shooting into my mouth. Please write another chapter.

You should write a follow up soon

You should write a sequel about their date and first fuck.

This is crying out for a sequal or two at least, I'm leaking

Chapter 2 should be their first date. Maybe they could fuck in Brad's car afterward!

Please! Update!

Pls listen up, this is one of my favourite in this site, it s a perfect base to build up a story that goes on, keep writing and well done

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!

Your story build up is so beautiful. This is one of the best stories I've read on this site.

Oh my god. Great writing.

The writing, buildup, internal dialogues of both -- everything is balanced. Just wonderful. Definitely one of the best stories. If I have one small criticism, it would be that the characters are stereotypically exaggerated. In fairness, stereotypes exist for a reason - they are sexually exciting! But I would like to see your incredible writing skills also applied to people whose physical appearance and situations don't necessarily coincide with their sexual roles. Even among stereotypes, when people of different races or sizes hook up, things may be the opposite of what their appearances might suggest. Hopefully, an idea like this interests you in a future story.

great story, will there be a sequal?

Loved this! Do a second part!

What a little cock sucking,cum eating, sissy faggot. My kind of gurl.

It's a crime that this story hasn't gotten a sequel when its so good with so much more potential.