All Comments on 'The Joke Is On Me'

You have been one of our favorite authors, but you really lowered yourself by posting this story. If you write a sequel to this, the hubby should divorce his wife immediately for breaking their marriage vows. We really do feel sorry for you and hope that you get better.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters @ CU

what are you talking about? the story is about a man who loves to SUCK SEMEN FLUIDS out of his wife's freshy fucked vagina!

can't fault the author for that! (whether a freudian thaing or no, it don't matter!)

the story has no emotion and little else other than that the husband loves to suck semen fluids out of his wife's freshly fucked vagina. period!

why the fuck would he, should he, divorce her, Laura and Lisa?

(if the situation was coersive/abusive, degrading, what-not, then your concerns are valid; but not in this case. Tom, the husband, the wife and all other men who Dave and his wife want to fuck around with do so on a consenting basis, to make sure DAve's wife give him lots of semenal fluids to suck. Nothing wrong with that, that is, if health issues/diseases, etc. don't concern Dave the husband)

Just vote "1" here and move on.

The .25 is for the correct spelling. This is really a very sorry story and probably not worth publishing.

broke marriage vows? interesting point of view for this place. especially since it is not the sex that is the breaking of vows but the doing it behind one's back that is the real issue of infidelity.

geez...

great story! ( some people can't handle the extra parts of the "closeness" they participated in)

I want to lick that cum from her, delicious!!

Made me so wet. Wish my husband was like that

If I were a serious reader I'll read serious novels and maybe were interested in the psychological behavior of the characteres. But I like these stories and I think that any analisis on them is futile. I also know that I'm reading fiction, but happens in real life. Not because these stories or the TV tube. King Solomon was King David's adulterous son.

I'll keep reading this, no matter what the moral morons do.

This story was right on the mark! Wonderful writing style.

I love a good cream pie and have had the oportunity experience similar to what was written here. I had nice visions and a good hardon while reading this.

Thanks to KY ridgerunner!

I likd it but it would have been more realistic if hubby made the joke...... wife got made had sex with Tom to teach hubby a lession. Hubby found out wife wanted to do this all along and was pissed of at Tom and kicked wife out. Wife wanted to run to Tom, but Tom was afraid hubby would kick the sh... out of him. After some time passed hubby and wife was able to repair their marriage...... Hubby never joked about wife again

Quite frankly, I found the husband to be a pathetic, seriously sick wimp. I don't like this kind of story in the first place, and wish this site had content codes like sol. I would have passed right on by this as it did nothing but piss me off.

Tim C.

Nice story, better than most 3-some MMF stories.. and it became a 4-some mfmf too?

Wish my wife would take a side lover although I am not too thrilled about eating another man's cum out of her box.

SICK...SICK...SICK...SICK...

Keep trying however this story was poorly written and Alvaron53 would not approve.

I've never done anything like this but it made me hard reading it. What-ever! It worked for me.

Where do they find the people who write garbage like this. Are there really that many perverts around?

the Ct.Yankee

Your not only sick your a horrible story teller.Your stories areterrible and make no sense something that comes from a sick mind.

Congratulations on your slut wife. You are going to get tired of this shit!

Give the writer a break, he is from Kentucky. Everyone there has a fucked up idea of right and wrong when it comes to sex.

though I'm sure hubby will have serious regrets in the end. Not as bad as some MMF stories I have read here though. There is a difference between casual swinging and deciding to essentially become a co husband. Kinda disturbing, good thing its only fiction. Tend to prefer FFM stories.

I just started eating my wifes cummy pussy, and I love it, I fantasize about eating her while a hard cock is pounding her but I will settle for just me and her. I love the story.

He doesn't say, whoa, that was a bad joke and nothing is going to happen!

If she took the steps to make something happen with tom, kathy starts a life without him.

You need a frontal labotamy. This type of story is born from a twisted mind. I definately will be passing on any more of your stories! R.T.

Open mouth put foot in it.... and more... I think Dave will OFF himself

What the fuck do they need Dave for? Oh, he needs to support the whore. The best he can hope for is to get laughed at and sloppy thirds.

How come when the whore is out he can't have a girl just for him?

Pathetic WACC authors.

Desert is an arid land, lots of sand.

Dessert is a sugary end to a meal.

They are NOT interchangeable!

Sand messes up a good meal.

Sugar melts in the infrequent rains!

Oh, yeah ... I did enjoy the rest of the tale!

husband

Ken-tuk-E

In my story a man befriends a newly hired coworker. After some time the new hire confirms he has met a woman, a lonely, unloved married woman. The woman has the same first name as the first man's wife. And it develops that the new man's new woman is, indeed, the first man's wife. I just haven't worked out an ending.

He had a fantasy. When she turns it into a reality, she earns her divorce by showing her husband that she has no love or respect for him. No way Hubby touches her with a ten foot pole afterwards. Who knows how many diseases she has?

1 star

Now you get Tom's fiancee and then get caught up on what he owes you when they get married.... he has quite a debt you realize and your wife, I hope, gets pissed when you collect the interest payments.

Garbage

nothing but a common whore ,low life piece of shit all the shit she put her, husband though over a joke and husband a fucking wimp , bust tom in his chops and divorce the nasty slut. are there no real men left

The joke is on the people who actually wasted time reading your garbage.

totally garbage story

Joke - think that was on me reading this crap

don't waste your time or mine ,pure horse shit ,nasty whore and wimp.

Thanks for helping me understand how national embarrassments like Mitch McConnell and Paul Rand can be elected to the Senate. This insight into how the people of Kentucky think and live explains it all. Bless their cucky, white nationalist little hearts...

Crap, crap, crap...

WTF.... This storyline was pure crap and I wasted time to read it.