by Bonodono
As usual, you craft such a good story.Now, after coming to terms with the finale of his story, you drop this. Now i hope for a continuation.keep up the great work.
I wasn't expecting a new chapter for a couple of months, so this was a nice surprise. Donnie gets surprised by finding about both his families. Good cliffhanger! Looking forward to the next chapter.
You put a lot into this one. Got me really excited for the next chapter.
It's good to see that Victoria still loved him even after the shooting. I was actually worried you would not mention her again. From the quality of your previous writing the next chapter with his daughters should be interesting.
I just realized that you and Moongrim work within the same universe. Now I got 20 chapters or so to read. Another sleepless night inbound I guess...
Can't wait for next installment. Just found this story and was up for 2 days reading it. You have a way of bringing the reader in and keeping them in the world you created. Keep up the great work.
Mike