All Comments on 'The Journey Ch. 01'

Nicely done bhuff. I cannot be the only reader who smiled about this tale's courtroom drama reflecting a recent legal battle between two la la land celebs. Nor am I alone in having a well defined image of protagonist Amber instantly and forever in mind prior to your describing her. Assuredly, the ability and effort required to keep Total Woman Academy an interesting as well as entertaining storyline is both admired and appreciated by all.

Also I'm suspecting the Judge is at least a Pledge Contributor if not a Guest Coach Tutor. Perhaps just wishful thinking. Cheers.

Where are these Academies for the spawn of the rich and famous?

What a job for the male and female coaches. All the fun and no responsibilities. I get the feeling all the girls are being trained as sex slaves for future Masters. I wonder if the Judge who knowingly sent her there is to be one the recipients?

Let’s see.