by DavidPatrick
This story!! Wow. I've read a lot of erotic stories in the past and I have to be as captivated by the writing as I was of this work. Kudos. Well-written, thoughtful, and sexy as fuck.
This was marvelous. I spent hours non-stop reading, leaking, hard until I finally was so tired, I drifted off to sleep. I was in Chpt, 9 but just couldn't stay awake, Just finished to last chapters and wishing for more, You captured the fucking and loving so well, I could feel the emotions of them both, the fulfillment and the conflicting tensions. I really appreciated that you didn't send it out piece by piece, This way it was one long, satisfying and challenging roller coaster ride, surprisingly without the soap opera type drama, it felt real. Thank you,
I’m so pleased to see you post. I think you have knocked ‘Please Wait for Me’ off the pedestal I have it on. This is magnificent.
One of the best stories I have ever read. Very real, very eloquently written, very honest. Thank you.
Mind-blowing brilliantly composed, heart warming and perhaps your best work. ELOQUENT is insufficient.