All Comments on 'The Keyholder Pt. 04'

Fantastic story! Would love to read more!

It's wonderful to read another chapter, and the way she granted him a ruined orgasm was incredibly hot. Thanks for continuing this story. :)

That isn't gentle. That is abuse.

Your Keyholder series is remarkable. You capture the angst of the "good boy" as well as he desire to please through denial. Thank you.

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Love it and can't wait to see what is next!

I really liked all 4 of the stories in this series. Love the dom and how she's so kind. I'm not really into chastity myself but this still got me super worked up! Great job, I'm excited to see what comes next.

Well, it's about time she introduced the prostate message to edge him to an incomplete orgasm. Wonder how long before the pegging with something bigger that her finger?

I really love this story. How it builds up and describes the duality in the mind of the boy. How he wants to desire and worship his lovely landlady, but also feels the need of his body. These two are going for wonderful times together and this can evolve in to several new chapters... i hope :-)

I was not sure what was going to happen. I think I would have had an anal orgasm..

Both Joyce and the gentledomme are maestros of the FLR ! Any man would be lucky to serve either one of them!

The story of Adam and Joyce is one I am sure many of us has craved for a long time, but is almost never told. Now we have it, a well written good story, and it is better than I could ever imagine. Great work! But I am curious: what would happen if Adam in some way disobeyed Joyce? We have seen how things are between them when everything goes according to plan, but how would Joyce react if Adam (even if involuntarily) went against Joyce's command?

I’m looking forward to additional chapters of this delightful story. 😍

This is absolutely entrancing!

I am enjoying this series, very much. Adam seems to have found his ideal apartment. Hopefully he can live up to the terms of both leases! Bravo!

The more I think about this the more I love it.

What’s in store for Adam is leaving me on tenterhooks. Joyce is a keyholder slowly raising the bar. I am hooked.😊💋

i'm also really hooked. love to read what's coming next

Some may say "its consensual" and "no one is being hurt" but it seems like long term chastity cage wearing and long term tease and denial is a classic brainwashing technique. If hes brainwashed over time is it truly consensual? Does he have the ability to truly change his mind about living in chastity, or has she taken that power away from him? How is one persons complete control over another healthy. Getting off on someone else giving up their personhood, handing it to another is not healthy. People who say that flr relationships are close and healthy are deluding themselves. So she will start to despise him. The the cuckolding starts. Reverse the sex roles and tell me that its just a kink. If there were a prevalence om mlr stories, websites, etc, where the woaman was locked in a chastity device and sewually teased long term feminists would have a shitstorm.

Perfect! Are you going to continue this series? We are eagerly waiting for more!

Pleassssse continued this!!

Please write a part 5.

This is amazing. This is fantastic. I'd love to read more. There are so many things I want her to do or have him do. So exquisitely loving. And the tone of the writing is perfect. I'd love to know what you are thinking of next. If you want a proof reader or someone to bounce ideas off of, please let me know.

I have been so busy, I haven't really been able to write more of the story. I'm glad people like it. To the person who was upset by it, you know it's just fantasy. Right? Real life FLRs exist, but they generally do not just happen this way.

Gentledomme, this is an amazing story. As I read it, I too am locked in a cage of my own doings. How lovely it would be the have a key holder like Joyce.

Loved this series. Hope the author has more coming soon!

Amazing, I hope chapter 5 is on its way soon 🙏

It would be amazing to have a woman with that much control and power.

More please.

Omg this is what I want! More please

more please

Wishing you could have me locked up! I need it!

Wait to tomorrow, feeling the cage slipping back on and the lock closing. Next chapter please.

5! Wonderful. She's so gentle, so self assured, so calm. Maybe you may share some prequel, with her life and experiences before? He's not the first student in the basement, and the ex-husband may suggest something...

I just finished the story, again. Possibly the best story on literotica.

I realize chapter 28 months and 4 days ago (but who's counting) and was just wondering if there might be a chapter 5? Maybe... eventually... a chapter 20? I like her gentle and caring approach. The premise of the story is good too. My hope is that if more chapters are written, that there's a little more development of characters through dialog between the two. Deeper conversations over he desperate frustration he feels. Her expressing how his frustration amplifies her arousal and why it makes her orgasms so much better. Why control over his cock, balls, prostate and orgasms not only makes her feel empowered, but incredibly aroused knowing that it causes him confusion and internal conflict. My hope is that in future chapters, she makes it far harder for him to say he would rather remain frustrated in exchange for continuing to sleep in her bed. My hope is that one night she rides him cow girl very slowly. Looking a him with the same even look, with an almost unperceived look of sympathy, and that in that instant, he blows he load, and she knows it. Rather than get upset, her same gentle nature remains constant. Her hips remain still as she ruins his orgasm inside her, doing his best to also remain still, as he knows she would want and expect from him. She leans forward to console him as he wears a little for failing. Not knowing if she will ever forgive him. She bends down with him still inside her, turns hie head to face the wall as she whispers in his ear "your body failed you, but more importantly, your mind failed you, and that's disappointing. You remained still, but your mind wanted to thrust into me, didn't is, sweet boy?" He nods. She continues "I know. I could sense it in you for weeks. Although it's disappointing, I have to admit, it has also been a source of my pleasure. Seeing that look in your eyes, knowing what you're thinking. Surpassing those urges, even when asked and given the choice, and denying you. This is a growth process. Like anything in life, when people take on difficult tasks, they often fail before they succeed. There are costs to failure but people get back up and continue to strive for success, even if the cost is high. Can you be strong for me? Are you willing to chin a price to continue for a chance to improve?" Unsure what she's implying, but rusting her, he nods and says "yes, I trust you and think you, you have been good to me, and patient..." she replies "shhh, we'll talk about this tomorrow. Maybe after dinner. For now, take a shower and come back to bed. No cage tonight or tomorrow but also no touching and no accidents. Don't bring this topic up until I'm ready to discuss it with you." In the morning he leaves for school early while she's asleep. He can't keep his mind off her and finds he's having a difficult time with constant erections. Later he gets a text, asking "can you please cook tonight?" He quickly and gladly responds "yes." She replies "Be naked. Don't respond." This leaves him thinking that during his quick response, he forgot to think that he would most likely have an erection the entire time he was naked in there home." To be continued. What consequences might she have in mind? Possibly take to him in an even tone at the dinner table about needing to assert her control over his cock, balls, prostate and cum, if he still wants this arrangement, by using toys. "Possibly a butt plug, beads, a vibrator or more. Do you think you could handle toys in your ass? He's aroused by her direct and even toned with him while talking about such an intimate topic. He's a bit dazed by it while his cock head presses against the edge of the table, just in her sight. She raises an eyebrow, waiting for a response. He say's "yes, of course, I trust you." She replies half jokingly "you say that a lot and I believe you do trust me and that makes me feel good, but I also feel like maybe you should feel a mix of trust and trepidation." She takes a bite of her food to enjoy the wonderful meal he cooks. Before continuing on with her train of thought, she commends him for such a good job with the meal "This is wonderful, you did such a good job." Taking another bite while knowing full well it's keeping him on edge. She then picks up her wine glass, motioning for him to add a little more to her glass. As he's pouring, she says in the same even tone from earlier "I think it's time to get a gentle ass fucking with my strapon. I want to make you cum that way. Please think about it, and if you don't mind, please do the dishes. Right now I'd like to take a shower. If you agree, don't say anything, just kneel at the threshold of the bedroom and request permission to enter. If you feel we need to discuss this further, wait for me in bed." With that, she kisses him on the cheek, ruffles his hair and walks off to the shower.

Excellent. Best I have seen in a while.