All Comments on 'The Keyholder'

Great story, I hope you will be kind enough to continue this story, as I would love to see where this leads.

Thanks and stay safe

Rgds Al

More please!

That was good! I also hope you'll continue.

I've been following your story on Reddit, and it's nice to see you're uploading stories on to here too.

Great story

Can't wait for Part 2. Presumably first thing she does is change the lock in case he'd kept a spare key.

I have another part that I'll add. :) I'm glad you are all enjoying. It has been fun to write.

Would love to read more about these two.

Oh hell ya!!

This is so erotic. I would love to see it evolve further.

This is one of the most atmospheric femdom stories I've read in a while. Is there any hope for more parts?

Isn't this the dream of every submissive?

Great story, Hope to read more from You!

Exactly what I'm looking for in erotica and personally. Looking forward to reading more from :).

what a good start!

An excellent start to what will hopefully be a long series. Easy to read, and both characters relatable.

Difficult not to want a Landlady like Joyce!

Absolutely magnificent writing. Such power. I am enthralled, and cant wait for more.

I must confess i was hoping for some SPH... as it's my weakness. But i wont deny this has been my favorite 3 part story in ages :)

Wonderful, exciting, satisfying, great writing - looking forward to much more from such a gifted author.

Thank you for all of the comments, everyone. I'm glad you are enjoying!

Very nicely paced, couldn’t help but want to be her tenet also

May I lick the precum off my cock?

how lovely and loving. I always enjoy the more "appreciative" and loving take on Mf dynamic.

Great start. Thank You so much Ma'am.

Joyce needed more teasing and denial. Story needed to be longer

Looking forward to read more

My cage feels tighter on me as I read this story. Being cumless for weeks at a time I love reading about others who also feel the power a keyholder has over you.I am owned if anyone contacts me details of my experiences cuckhold and caged will humiliatingly be shared publicly.My keyholder shares my weeping and sobbing to cum at the slightest request.Every degrading act i endure is recorded to be distributed stripped of every shred of dignity I serve her utterly totally from my knees in her chains.My blue balls acheing.

I love this! I keep coming back and rereading it. Thank You!

That story is truly the fantasy of many men, old and young a like. I wonder if there really are women out there like that.

Too funny for words. The cage is a toy he can remove at any time. Stupid

It's a cheap toy. Remove it at any time without the key. Dumb

Nicely done. Started at the beginning without pages of useless "backstory".

Very engaging read. A locked young man and an older woman, exactly what I needed.

Cums with couch, how lucky can a young boy be (!)

At your service Ma'am, I'll be your tongue ride since I'm locked