All Comments on 'The Kidnap of Sweet Sally'

Love your story and look forward to more.

Please continue.

The story had a play-by-play feel to it that caused the characters to seem a bit flat. However, you had an interesting storyline, and the overall read was surprisingly enjoyable. I hope to read more chapters. Oh to the previous commenter who believes this was a "love story for a rapist"- You obviously haven't read this story. There was NO SEX. Also, for a nc story this was tame (as in no violence).

Thank you for your replies. I'm really sorry if it offends some people - it was not meant to in any way.

This story would NOT happen, is about ficticious people and it has NEVER happened.

It really is just a fantasy from the dark side of my imagination - that is purely ALL fiction.

Maybe I should not write any further chapters, as in writing my stories I have no intention or desire to EVER offend people.

I am just a woman who enjoys a new found hobby of creating and sharing my erotic stories.

You'll never please everybody, but this is a good story that needs another chapter. It matches some of my fantasies too, and I'd love to see where you take this.

this was a good setup for a great story lol love to read your next chapters lol

Thanks

Please hurry with the rest of the story; I can't wait to find out what happens!!!

Felt more like a romance than an NC story. If this is how a kidnap victim and fucktoy is really treated, I wouldn't mind trading places with Sally. An interesting turn of events would be to turn Sally into a Domme for all 3 men. They are anyway falling all over themselves to please her and seem to love serving her.