by Hummingbird38
Felt more like a romance than an NC story. If this is how a kidnap victim and fucktoy is really treated, I wouldn't mind trading places with Sally. An interesting turn of events would be to turn Sally into a Domme for all 3 men. They are anyway falling all over themselves to please her and seem to love serving her.
Please hurry with the rest of the story; I can't wait to find out what happens!!!
this was a good setup for a great story lol love to read your next chapters lol
Thanks
You'll never please everybody, but this is a good story that needs another chapter. It matches some of my fantasies too, and I'd love to see where you take this.
Thank you for your replies. I'm really sorry if it offends some people - it was not meant to in any way.
This story would NOT happen, is about ficticious people and it has NEVER happened.
It really is just a fantasy from the dark side of my imagination - that is purely ALL fiction.
Maybe I should not write any further chapters, as in writing my stories I have no intention or desire to EVER offend people.
I am just a woman who enjoys a new found hobby of creating and sharing my erotic stories.
The story had a play-by-play feel to it that caused the characters to seem a bit flat. However, you had an interesting storyline, and the overall read was surprisingly enjoyable. I hope to read more chapters. Oh to the previous commenter who believes this was a "love story for a rapist"- You obviously haven't read this story. There was NO SEX. Also, for a nc story this was tame (as in no violence).
Love your story and look forward to more.