by Maeve_Kennefick
Interesting idea, but the unexplained killing seems to me a very poor way of resolving the situation.
So 2* only
Agree it’s an interesting idea, but too many unresolved issues to make it a pleasurable read. Some of the threads would have added interest and erotic possibilities.
An unusual story. I definitely liked it and it has potential to go further. Men always seem to think watching 2 women is hot but not really getting the point that lesbians are unlikely to want a man to join in. Surely being bi has all of the benefits? 4 stars.
Tess (uk)
I hope this is part of a series that explores the relationships further. Like the concept, but as others have said the ending only leaves lots of questions. Hope to read more.