All Comments on 'The King of Middlesex Pt. 01'

I have to question of any 18 year of could be this sophisticated and philosophical and unselfish.

I certainly wasn't and I was fortunate enough to have an actual and similar experience to your fictional one. It didn't end well, but certain memories I cherish to this day.

Well done and having spent all morning with you, hope you write more!

I can't begin to tell you how much I love this story. I do happen to think that somewhere, somehow, there might be a VERY rare sane, very nice natured, kind 18 year old with the potential of becoming very sophisticated after being exposed to something like the situation here. I'm very new to Literotica, but so far, I've been able to find some really fantastic and HOT, sophisticated stories, by some really goof writers. I am a retired journalist/writer, but my life has been a bit like a picaresque novel. I've had a few different very diverse incarnations and professions. One even in the sex business. And, I've had some very unique situations in my life that might mirror parts of this story. In later mid life I could have been a bit what Mark is here. Only, not nearly as good as depicted here. I'm going to leave this for a while and hope to pick up the second part of the story later today. I hope beachbum72 will be more prolific and write more of stories like this