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Click hereDo we continue south towards Beryl and risk being spotted by a far superior force we'd likely not escape from, or do we head north, back home to Jasper, and hope we don't find it under siege?
End of Part 1
- COMMENTS
202GE10 months agoOverall the writing is good but the story appears to be meandering. Thanks for sharing this story.
Anonymous10 months agoMy 2 cents
A very good start. You kept my interest throughout this installment. I like the story line and pace. The characters are well developed. I kept guessing who would end up with who. I hope this is not a one and done. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination.
