All Comments on 'The Kiss'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Simple on the surface, yet complex and beautifully intense beneath...

This piece is gorgeously written and teasingly pragmatic, all while preserving the emotional and metaphysical intensity of mounting eroticism throughout... I love it.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 3 years ago

What a great way to wake up in the morning.

I'd like to do that every day--if I could. It's a very erotic scene, but could you introduce us to these two lovers and tell us more about them--what makes them tick--are they married--and so on. Give us a plot--she's his boss's unmarried daughter? Or perhaps they are newlyweds? You have a great start, but please tell us more.

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