by HerHind
I can't believe he's an engineer at 21. When did he start college? At the age of 16?
It was good but the sex was to fast. I suggest not jumping right away to write the stories of the others. Write one more to expand upon their sexual relationship.
"Things that don't matter are your age, shape, size, color, hair or lack there of, presence of all body parts or anything else, just your naked, glorious self proudly displayed."
1) 'thereof' is a single word; consider getting / using an editor.
"I also made sure the lamp shone nicely full on the big bushy muff that surrounded the dripping, swollen lips of my opening."
2) RoFL! - nothing like disproving your own argument straight out of the gate! 😄
There a very few things that are as gross/disgusting as body hair, especially the pubic variety! (on *ANYONE*!) 🤦🤮
I'd already be running away, trying my damndest to un-see the absolute horror-show you described there, and after that, the rest of this plot goes an entirely different direction...
Didn't even bother finishing the story after that... 1*