All Comments on 'The Knight and His Wench'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Second person perspective

It's very annoying. Lose it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love it!

The second person is great, makes the entire story much more rounded. Great work you two!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
nice

its alittle confusing in the begining but adds to the suspense at the end, you might work on how they're talking though, a little hard to follow

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