All Comments on 'The Knowing Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What are you thinking???

This story is perfect for literotica. Please don't wait another 6 months for the next installment. This is a great story 5 stars all the way!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I love this

Nevermind the perverts. This is lovely! Come on with capter 8. DON'T TAKE TOO LONG PLEASE!

Desire6194Desire6194over 7 years ago
Two thumbs up and five stars

I am so in love with this story and can't wait to read the next chapter. Please don't take too long to post the next installment.

theelovely1glotheelovely1gloover 7 years ago
Realistic

The buildup and complexities are Real!

Keep going and let them both realize their Need to be One, with each other.

5*****

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wattpad

Try putting it on wattpad

bwwm4mebwwm4meover 7 years ago
Touching

This is one of the best stories on Literotica. 20 years of heartache because neither of them are willing to tell the truth about how they truly about the other.

Dark_SisterDark_Sisterover 7 years ago
Delighted

Been looking forward to the next installment for quite a while. I was not disappointed. Please continue.

MyaHunterMyaHunterover 7 years ago
Tha-ank You!!!!

Ugh, I'm so happy you posted another chapter!! My heart is momentarily full of joy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Get an editor! Really!

I love the story. It jumps off the page. It is too painful and sadly true. But those language errors are killing it for me. It would be twice as good if someone who knew standard English had gone over it.

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