All Comments on 'The Lab Rats Ch. 07 - In a Barrel?'

Thank you. Loved the fiction

Loved it all the way

A good ending, but a little bit of a let down also.

First let down was the title, it didn't fit like the others you used. the full idiom is I'm sure you're aware: Like shooting fish in a barrel: which means something so easy it requires no skill and/or is no fun. For the way you ended this tale I would think Oh, Rats!... or You Rat fink!... or Don't Rat us out! would have been more fitting.

The other big let down for me was the lack of answers to who was behind this and why. I understand leaving it to the reader's imagination, but you intrigued me with the setup and I wanted 'Your' answers to those questions.

All in All though it was a good story and I'm glad you gave them (all 3) a happy ending. Thanks for sharing. 5 stars.

I enjoyed the story. I would have liked an answer about who the kidnapper was. Thanks

I love the way you make the mother more important than the sister, I wish that we had more stories like that where the mother is treated like the Queen !

Why…does…every…bit…of…dialogue…need…ellipsis?

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Loved the first 5 chapters. I question Chapter 6. I liked Cgapter 7 in that the incestuous relationship flourished and thrived. I was happy to read that they regained more of their memories. Except for the chamberand blackmail, the love between consenting adults, regardless of the relationshp, is how I imagine the perfect mutually agreeable incestuous relationship would be in real life. A definite 5 star series. You are only the second author that I am following.

Well I’m a slow reader took me all week to read the whole story. I found the whole story well written and loved that you indirectly spun a bit of Sci-Fi into the plot with the whole abduction twist. I give the story and plot line as I have thru the whole story 10 stars. Thanks You!

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Very, very enjoyable reading.