All Comments on 'The Lake Ch. 03'

I really loved this series. Looking forward to reading more from you!

Great story! I loved how you wrote Kali and Nik. The scenes were hot and sexy. They come of as two poeple who love each very much. Looking foward to another chapter

Thanks for a great read...Nic and Kali are awesome together...what a vacation. I hope that you will continue to write about them. Thanks again.

You have written a wonderful story. I love it.

I like it! It was good story. The plot was good but it need more drama more depth. Basically the plot was about sex and we all need that.

Now.

Five, and you should continue writing.

I especially enjoy well written stories like these three “The Lake” entries. They are clear examples of well thought out storylines with excellent spelling, grammar, syntax and continuity of tense. I felt a genuineness in these stories which had me thinking I knew the author was “experiencing” rather than writing the story. Not an easy task.

The only disappointment was when I looked at the author’s biography and could not verify my suppositions about the author. Please fill in more information! You have me hooked such that I would enjoy communicating with you in reality.