by JamaicanMeCrazy
I especially enjoy well written stories like these three “The Lake” entries. They are clear examples of well thought out storylines with excellent spelling, grammar, syntax and continuity of tense. I felt a genuineness in these stories which had me thinking I knew the author was “experiencing” rather than writing the story. Not an easy task.
The only disappointment was when I looked at the author’s biography and could not verify my suppositions about the author. Please fill in more information! You have me hooked such that I would enjoy communicating with you in reality.
I like it! It was good story. The plot was good but it need more drama more depth. Basically the plot was about sex and we all need that.
Thanks for a great read...Nic and Kali are awesome together...what a vacation. I hope that you will continue to write about them. Thanks again.
Great story! I loved how you wrote Kali and Nik. The scenes were hot and sexy. They come of as two poeple who love each very much. Looking foward to another chapter
I really loved this series. Looking forward to reading more from you!