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cageysea9725cageysea9725about 2 years ago

Nice little story.

It was well executed, with little, if anything, to find fault with in spite of the PG-13 rating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

An intense display of that which non-twins might never know, or understand.

Well done.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 2 years ago

Really good but I’m a bit confused where we were dropped off. 4*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Pretty good start, but the end was a little disappointing, i hoped, that they would become a couple, have kids and love forever...

4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It was nice but the ending was an abrupt change and a little disappointing

juanviejojuanviejoabout 2 years ago

GOOD WHILE IT LASTED...ENDED TOO SOON.

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