All Comments on 'The Last Bite of Cheri Cheesecake'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

She turns into a vampire— cool Halloween story .

He gets off on slapping and choking her— not so cool.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Witty scenario and great banter. The exorcism scene was the chef's kiss.

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