All Comments on 'The Last Bridge in Pittsburgh Ch. 10'

Loved it!! Please keep going and post the next chapter asap; can't wait to read it!!

Really cool twist :D

So anyone can give suggestions during trance, I am sure that will not lead to problems ;)

Enjoyed your work very much; I hope there will be more!

Sorry I haven’t commented before. I just had to keep reading. I like the pacing of the story. It’s good that he’s still feeling his way. I hate stories where the protagonist instantly becomes a master mind controller.

I’m really looking forward to the next chapters. So many possibilities with Sara, Kate & Ava.

Love the story can not wait for next 10 chapters.

I'm loving the world-building as we go along, without too much exposition. Really well done! Looking forward to continuing the story.