All Comments on 'The Last Bridge in Pittsburgh Ch. 11'

Fingers crossed he gets some control over Ava. She at least needs to join in the physical fun!

Great story. Always left wanting more

Ava needs to suck some cock!

I love the way the protagonist keeps discovering this stuff is complicated.

I love this series so much

*you love this series so much…*

No, seriously, I do!

*No, seriously, you-*

Oh be quiet! (Another stellar chapter. I look forward to each one.)

I like how he’s losing control of the narrative. Ava seems smart and sly. I think she wants In but not as a mindless plaything.

Keep this going.

This is one of the best stories I have read here. The main guy has to struggle to keep up with his implanted suggestions. Ava does need to get ducked though

Your a great writter, looking forward to more chapters

Love this story.... I keep coming back hoping to see an update.

Hopefully life is being good to u. And if you get the chance this story deserves to be completed. Thanks for sharing it.

This series is really good, i hope you finish before any more bridges collapse in Pittsburgh

This is great. Need to keep it going.

I really enjoyed this, hope there is more to come!

Ok I usually don’t comment on anything really but I wanted to let you know that this is really well written and I hope you continue because I want to know why Ava and Sara have so many issues. The sex details have been good but I am truly invested in the relationships and want to know more. Thank you for what you have written so far. Also super glad that Pittsburg is still around after climate change has really ramped up.

Don't stop now. I think Ava needs to lick some cum and there is some heaviness from the past that needs resolution before the sisters are sound don't you think?