All Comments on 'The Last Brunch'

From the begining i felt this was rather a different type of story. There were a few lines that did not make sence to me, no matter how i read them. Still the story kept my attention.

But, the end was far too abrupt, causng the entire story to slide off the pages, thus forming a black pool of worthless disapointment !

But this is just "my" comment.

I feel the story moved at a nice pace. It was a little experimental, I started the timelines at two different points, NOW and THEN, and slowly had them converge at the end. I didn't want to write a long story, I wanted to keep it short, just a slice of life from a lucky T-girl and her wife. Thanks for reading...

I loved it. Nice to have a wife approve. I never do in my stories LOL. You put so much effort into your work. I can't keep focused on a story for this long.

Thanks, leeanna19, sometimes I feel I am too harsh with the girlfriends and wives in my stories. I know women like this exist. I hope at least some CDs are very happily married to a very involved wife. LOL Thanks for reading...

Outstanding! 5 Stars.

Thank you CindyTV, for reading and taking a break from your own wonderful stories...

Great story as usual.

Thanks, glitter_Collector for reading about this crazy contest...

Never give her the combination and then dump her. Done and done.

Hmmm, thanks Anonymous for commenting. I will have to do a re-read and figure out your creative thoughts. Thanks for reading.

good story. I liked it.

why are cocks always very big in these stories?

Ha... I don't know... To me, the most important thing about a cock is that it is attached to a man, someone who has to be nice, friendly, loving, and have a sense of humor... I think size doesn't matter, but in a story, it is great when a large one makes an appearance, ha... thanks for reading VA...

Great story! Loved it brings back memories.

Excellent Brittneyjessica, thanks for reading...