All Comments on 'The Last High School Bullying'

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49WIZARD8849WIZARD88almost 2 years ago

I love read LIT because of the variety of way you can tell stories. You can do so many things with each category. Given how we have a lot of sensitive people in the comment sections, this story will get TRASHED!!! The Mother is the true villain IMO

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What a sorry faggot ass story I hope the writers dies along with his mom they deserve to die like stupid cunts

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I have reported this violent and disgusting story. I hope I can get it removed from Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Worst shit I have seen on this website

EZ8ltEZ8ltalmost 2 years ago

Fetish cat, you manga hentai artist wannabe weeb.

greg50greg50almost 2 years ago

Mother and bully keep treating the son the same way all through college

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ch2 pls

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Brilliant story. Love the details on heels and nails and dress. More description of the hot Mom. Keep it going. More stories please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What a sick, awful story. Not one thing to make it interesting. No changes, no fight back, no infusion of some sort of reality.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Poor offering in my opinion.

I’m not sure how this would be incest/taboo. Mother and son don’t have any sexual tension here. Non-consentual or fetish would be more accurate, perhaps gay…maybe horror.

You imply many things in your scene ( too much missing to be a story) but also provide very few details and most everything else. How did the bullying get to this point? How did mom get involved? Why does Leonard endure it? Why would it stop now? Even Leonard doesn’t think that graduation is a compelling reason.

So we have a literary offering without a beginning or ending. The problem or conflict is not clearly defined and certainly not resolved. It is also miscategorized. This is as poorly received as a heavy metal riff would be to classical music aficionados.

happymuffinhappymuffinalmost 2 years ago

I love this story so much i really do. I wish i could be the mom of this story!

jwbailey00jwbailey00almost 2 years ago

Trash written by a retard whose family tree doesn't fork

GothCuntGothCuntalmost 2 years ago

FUCK love this betrayal of the mommy! 5 stars!

GrayroadeGrayroadealmost 2 years ago

Damn mommy got owned, real fine work on this one ;)

CounselorWhiteCounselorWhitealmost 2 years ago

Mommy why couldn´t i get such a send off? :( lucky whimp!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

WTF?!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

sick

niggaplz101niggaplz101almost 2 years ago

i loved this! i wish andrea just gave in an bullied lenny as well. no prequel needed, just straight into the scenario and action. do a swirl if you’re up for it!

bluerowdybluerowdyalmost 2 years ago

Terrible, how could any mother do that to her child! Call the police for assault and battery. Every mother worth being a mother would call the police. Bullying of any kind should never be tolerated! Where is the incest, this story should be pulled from this area.

homerjayhomerjayalmost 2 years ago

I didn't like everything about this story but it's not bad. Thank you for sharing it.

Bham487Bham487almost 2 years ago

Thanks for sharing your opinion of women.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

And the next night,both Mother and bully were found "ended" by baseball bat.The police are still looking for leads,but believe it to be a crime of passion...There,finished it for you!

tam30173tam30173almost 2 years ago

I really don't like saying this but probably in the top 5 of the worst stories I've read.

SemperSolus0198SemperSolus0198almost 2 years ago

The author, along with the mom and the bully, need to be gassed.

My only regret reading this story is that i can't give you a negative rating, you certainly deserve it. Go get some help before you actually hurt someone you unhinged psycho.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This need a prequel and sequel where Mom is pregnant and they impregnate his new wife!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

“No the fuck I am not mom. I am reporting you and Jake to the police and I hope to never see you again. You are a terrible mother and you will die alone.”

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic story. I hope you don't get discouraged by the other comments. Would love to read more of your stories. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

See I would like to see you flip the story upside down since it’s all Fantasy let Lennard go away for ten years becomes successful and gives his bully

and Mom a taste of their own medicine

Make him everything his bully was just make him a penis implant 🤷 just would be a crazy twist you already have the setup good luck

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Would love to see a version from the mother's POV. What would she say about her son to the bully when the son was not around? Would she still "claim" it was all for his sake, or would she indulge in the bully's (and possibly her's) fantasies? Would she reveal that they plan to continue the degradation through college and that she lied to him?

So many possibilities...

YfiCaptionsYfiCaptionsalmost 2 years ago

With half of the comments in here you'd think Literotica readers believed everything in stories happened IRL. What a bunch of snowflakes.

Gotta love moms flipping off their own sons. Mom/son betrayal is great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love how pissed people get when so,some dares to have a humiliation kink… like, hey, if you want your non-humiliation-themed incest stories, that’s the majority of the stories. Let us weird perverts have our thing!

Really liked the writing here, there were a few turns of phrases that stuck out as being better than your usual Literotica stories,

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxalmost 2 years ago

because zero people wanna mention this . i'll become the one doing it --- your obviously major follower

( i'm a slut for my son's bully ) * author : andibob69 * [ Jake deranged vicious bully + Jake deranged

vicious bully . Jake deranged vicious bully & Jake deranged vicious bully ] ...............

YOU DO NEED GETTING THEIR CONSENT . SO YOU CAN DO THINGS THAT'll REVOLVE AROUND

STUFF THEY'VE GOTTEN DONE . EXCEPT THOUGH SERIOUS MAJOR PLOT TWIST " Jake from

their stories . same dude same guy same man . whether prior their stories whether after their stories "

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxalmost 2 years ago

EVERYBODY THAT MADE COMPLAINTS . EVERYBODY THAT TALKED ABOUT REPORTING THIS ::

NOBODY MADE YOU READ THE FULL DAMN THING . MATTER FACT NOBODY MADE YOU READ

LITERAL WHATSOEVER . SO STOP THE STUPID ASS BULLSHIT

Al_AnonAl_Anonalmost 2 years ago

SemperSolus ... you call the author an unhinged psycho yet you think that the author (a real person) needs to die along with his fictional characters. Which means you can't separate fiction from reality (unhinged) and saying that anyone needs to die because you didn't like the concept of a story is pretty psychotic. I don't think the author is the one who needs professional care.

zodden1zodden1almost 2 years ago

To the (mostly cowardly) anon haters....Why read a story when you don't like the content to begin with? This site has a an entire NC section which contains far more terrible acts then in here but how come those stories don't get this kind of reaction? Wishing death on the author? Reporting stories when ages line up with the rules? Get a life! This site is going downhill, mostly due to the many snowflakes reading stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

"This is so unrealistic!"

Yes, extremely, unlike your catalogue of Mommy/Son incest stories, yeah this is the line lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hey idiot… this is in the wrong category.

IstrokeCIstrokeCalmost 2 years ago

It is certainly at the extreme end of this type of story! But why read it and then get so angry? Just read those things which turn you on. It is well written ,which I expect irritates those who loathe the subject matter. For those of us who find cuckolding stories stimulating , there is , for me, integral to the best of them an element of betrayal - usually of a husband, who perhaps deserves his fate , but often who doesn’t , and may be hurt as well as excited, despite himself, by his wife’s disloyalty.

‘ Bullied son’ stories play on a similar theme but we expect the bond between mother and son to be sacred , and so the taboo involved in breaking that trust is more shocking, but essentially triggers the same , if more intense reaction, than ‘ conventional’ cuckoldry.

Here NNgh plunges straight in without the build up , with all the torn feelings and guilt as a mother struggles between maternal instincts and raw lust. He ( assuming it is a he) could easily add a prequel exploring that.

Perhaps it should be classed as fetish though? But anyway it’s a fantasy and doesn’t imply approval. As I said it’s at the extreme , but it’s undeniable that some women are attracted to men capable of violence and can be excited by it. 99% of such women , and they are a small minority to begin with, would draw the line where a family member was threatened, but it’s not unimaginable that such a woman might exist and legitimate to explore that fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I came so hard reading this... keep it going! I hope that's not the end of the Bully and the Mom cuckolding the Son. I LOVE when the Mom is an accomplice to the bullying, it adds another layer of "wrong" that makes me cum so hard!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This was amazing, great job! Can't wait for a sequel. Maybe a sister, girlfriend, or wife!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I think this is one of the worst stories ever. Not by writing, which is fantastic, but by plot. The sadness and everything is damn overwhelming. Please continue writing stories just don't make them like this.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzaralmost 2 years ago

This is a carefully written "Non-Con" story that unfortunately landed in the "Incest" category.

SemperSolus0198SemperSolus0198almost 2 years ago

Jesus Al Anon, I never said i would do it my self. But to be fair, if the author goes, the idea (Characters) go with him. Don't be so dramatic, go get your syphilis cleared up so it doesn't impact your brain any more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

There's a fetish category for a reason. This story is the reason.

There is nothing erotic about humiliation. Both those who desire it and those who provide it should seek professional help.

☆ because bullies and bullying are bad, always, no exceptions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Puke, what a fucking waste of internet space.

norstormnorstormalmost 2 years ago

People need to learn to separate fiction from reality. Very hot story. Thanking for writing it. Please don't get dissuaded from writing more by these weirdos who get angry at a porn story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The spitting sequence was off the charts. Hot as hell. Keep it going. More stories please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Damn!!! I want some of that hot mom's ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Damn I thought my life was at a low. I can't imagine getting so upset over what someone else jerks off too , provided its legal. I suppose women who like to get humiliated or demeaned during sex are just fucked up in the head too. Great work work my guy. Writing and flow needs some work, but the passion clearly shine through.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

One of the hottest store I ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

JUSTICEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Why this crap is not in FETISH category???

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Aww!! I guess the author wrote this load of crap based on his own life experience. His mommy never loved him, I guess.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story. I can’t imagine what you’re stories will be like if they get better. Keep writing!

AstronomalyAstronomalyover 1 year ago

I’ll refrain from rating this, since I’m certainly not the target audience for this. (Or am I? Is this attempting to elicit a negative reaction on purpose? I’m not quite sure.) This is honestly one of the most horrendous stories I’ve ever read on this site, and if this ever came from experience, I worry for the author. The description is insanely well done bait, so props to the author for that. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I’m going to vomit my intestines into my trash can.

DeprivedoneDeprivedoneover 1 year ago

This is the hottest bully story I've read anywhere.

I understand the negative responses which are natural. I think most everyone has that response unless they open up to different fetishes at some point. This is obviously a fetish story and it is a crowning achievement in it's category.

For those offended again it's a natural response but you can just not read it. The Author is simply filling a market for this fetish. I'm sure there are things you read that others don't take to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Any chance of an update on weather you might be working on something? New story, Sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Mom-son cuckold stories contradicts with themselves.

Because "a mom must protect her kids".

"Any woman who does not protect her kids cannot be considered as a mom".

And this is a really very very very very very very very "sick" / "disgusting" story.

And in real life a story like that would end really "bloody".

You cannot think to "stay alive" after doing something like that to someone.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Keep going. Reading this it’s shocking and you really feel the humiliation of the son. I love stories that have femdom, humiliation and betrayal. Believe it or not, humiliation does turn people on. I would think anyone who reads content on this site would be aware of this. This type of story is cutting edge in my opinion because humiliation femdom betrayal incest stories are tough to find even on a site as big as literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Keep it up. Soo hot

MfkndragonMfkndragon11 months ago

This wasn't incest and you wrote the son to be a pussy it's people who thinks these kinds of stories are good that gives men a bad name if the son would stood up for himself even if he got is ass kicked the so called Bully would have left him alone

MfkndragonMfkndragon11 months ago

@deprivedone there was nothing fetish about this you there is a market for it if there is it's from people who Bully people who are weaker then them cause there fucking cowards a real man would not like this kind of story a real man wouldn't even write this kind of story anyone who likes this,who understands this and anyone who writes about this needs there ass kicked if you ask me and any mother who would do something like that to there son needs the same thing done to her

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

No incest...?

Not much of a mom...?

Different category, man

clutterbuck52clutterbuck5211 months ago

Great story! One of the best NTR stories I have read. Shame it's so short, and that the author haven't written any more.

Would be nice if Jake phones Mom the next day, telling her he's going to the same college as Lennard. She would be very pleased, knowing she wil be able to continue her adventures with Jake.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This is the best story that I ever read. I do loved if some bully guys takes my mom and humiliate me like this

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Fucking BRUTAL. And fucking awesome. Total humiliation, total dominance, total mind break for mommy. She is Jakes personal toilet and her pussy son it to! This story always gets my nut.

GoodalphamaleGoodalphamale3 months ago

Somebody copied your story, and it became a hit

AhboomAhboom2 months ago

Please do another one with brother/sister Bully cuck theme. This story is great

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